Jackie's definitely the ringleader; she's bossy, with so much confidence she's often cocky. I dunno, I thought older kids would know better than to cut holes in sheets.

(Oh, and the whole mention of Halloween at all? Is probably because of your latest thing on passing_tones. Not exactly inspirational, but it put it in my mimnd.)

I'm glad Daniel worked so well; yeah, I angst over names, particularly boy names.

Huh, I'm puzzled though that Jackie's lines in the beginning and end didn't seem like the same character.