Oh, good God. You discovered my original writing journal.

Yeah, I'm in a severely unhappy place right now with my original work (well, writing in general, but specifically original stuff). I was kind of amazed when I wrote the stuff for this entry that they came out as decently as they did, and I really appreciate your comments agreeing that they aren't worthless. Thank you for the feedback, too, I do really want to hear specifically what doesn't work, versus my own sense of "oh my God you suck so, so much, burn everything."