Jeremy the Artistic Businessman

And now I'm actually going to post something more than a hundred words!

If only it was written more recently than a year ago.

Nevertheless.  I like them and want them here.

( Jeremy the Artistic Businessman )

What I particularly like, re-reading now: The second half of the fourth paragraph, as it gets into identities and things.  And my aversion from too many literally romantic issues.

Joseph the Observer (previously "What If," but that's trite)

This one is partly written from a self-insert perspective, though not as much as one would think. 

I like Joseph's morbid, cynical sense of humor.  And I really like how I did the ending.

( Joseph )