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Start of a new story (again, for school)
Sep. 9th, 2008 01:30 am ROUGH DRAFT AS IN I JUST FINISHED WRITING THIS WITH ONE READ-THROUGH.
I think it'll be a fairly lengthy short-story; maybe even three short stories. I don't know. This may be the beginning or it may be in the middle somewhere. I have very little idea of what's up with anyone, especially Jackie. I just desperately don't want her to become a Mary-Sue of any flavor. But please please please give me some initial feedback.
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I think it'll be a fairly lengthy short-story; maybe even three short stories. I don't know. This may be the beginning or it may be in the middle somewhere. I have very little idea of what's up with anyone, especially Jackie. I just desperately don't want her to become a Mary-Sue of any flavor. But please please please give me some initial feedback.
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